Private compensation brief
Your offer is not the number on the letter.
Tax, rent, and equity risk turn a handsome package into something smaller. Keep is the number you can actually live on — and the script to ask for more.
The decoder
Put the letter on the table.
Northline
BWhat you keep
Harbor · San Francisco Bay Area
True Keep / year
$167k
- After-tax cash
- $202,872
- Benefits
- $17,000
- Equity you can count
- $56,571
- Effective tax
- 37%
- 4-year Keep
- $666,277
- Hourly Keep
- $79
Northline · Austin
True Keep / year
$190k
- After-tax cash
- $153,714
- Benefits
- $12,150
- Equity you can count
- $35,910
- Effective tax
- 26%
- 4-year Keep
- $761,412
- Hourly Keep
- $84
Northline keeps $23,784 more per year after tax and local prices.
Harbor$166,569
Northline$190,353
The brief · $29
How to ask. What to ask for.
Tax stack
Where the letter goes before it reaches you.
- Federal income$76,097
- State income$26,558
- Social Security$11,439
- Medicare$5,785
- Effective rate37%
Northline effective rate 26% · marginal federal 24%.
Four-year vest
Year one is not the job. The next three are.
| Year | Cash keep | Equity | Keep |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | $202,872 | $56,571 | $166,569 |
| 2 | $202,872 | $56,571 | $166,569 |
| 3 | $192,202 | $57,137 | $158,486 |
| 4 | $192,202 | $57,137 | $158,486 |
The ask
To match Northline, Harbor needs one of these — not all three.
- Base lift$50,000
- Extra grant (vest)$126,000
- Or bonus pts+17.0 pts
Talking points
- Do not negotiate headline TC. Negotiate Keep. You are $23,784 / year behind after tax and rent.
- A base lift of $50,000 or $126,000 more equity closes the gap. Ask for the mix, not a single lever.
- San Francisco Bay Area prices are 132 vs. Austin at 106. Same salary is not the same life.
- Get the number in the written offer, not a verbal 'we can look at refresh in year two.'
Send this
Short. No apology. The number is the argument.
Hi — thank you again for the Harbor. I’m genuinely interested and want to make this work. I have a competing package that keeps about $23,784 more per year after tax and local prices. I’m not asking you to match a headline number — I’m asking to close the Keep gap. Any of these would get me there: • Base of $235,000, or • Additional equity of $126,000 over the vest, or • A mix of signing + refresh that lands the same annual Keep. I can sign this week if we close that gap.
- Public RSUs are treated as wages in the year they vest (income tax + FICA).
- True Keep is adjusted for local prices (San Francisco Bay Area = 132 vs. 100 US average).
- Signing bonus is spread across 2 years so a one-time check does not inflate year-one Keep.